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the bathing ladies pg 2

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finished up page 2. i actually drew some ladies! also, i've never done a page with 9 panels before. i was really trying to push the drama leading up to the pay-off panel.

page 1 can be seen here: boston-joe.deviantart.com/art/…

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I gotta say, I'm not digging the white tics in the black. Particularly this piece for some reason. I understand their function,so maybe it's because I can still see the strokes in the black, but the illusion is not happening for me. Maybe more intentional placement or a variety of sizes? How about using some more white ink in your work? It would be cool to see you work in white ink on a black board...